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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
(this is strange-- allison and cathy may know what this is about) After tonight- on the way home I try to close my eyes (as I heat my freezing body) but every time I do colored pictures of you (although you were wore black) and my arms resting on your shoulders, and yours around my waist.. So tight, So warm, So loved. And after tonight.. "i told you i'd never say goodbye . now i'm slipping on the tears you made me cry but that's what i get" [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (11-02-2002 02:55 PM).] |
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Surreal Junior Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 35Paris |
I really liked that last line, how it felt like there would be a continuation or something. This was a simple piece that was very compelling at the same time. Nice work  Glory is a silent thing-- Mineral |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, i liked this one  i wouldnt no what it means tho j/j this was a fantastic write ~sam~ !respect the alphabet! |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I love it MIchelle, I mean sara. Good one billy bob, I mean sara. ok enough shananagins. LOL. Maybe the last line would be completed with another hug. LOL *Allison* |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I appologize for all the spelling errors, but i believe you've all made them out.. (i've corrected them) ~~SuRReaL~~ Lol.. the deal about the ending was that i couldn't end it so, i did the good ol' dot dot dot (...) thing, and that's how it 'stopped'. (but this story will never end) ~~SaM~~ the onyl reason i didnt write ur name waz cuz I talked to Cathy and Allison about it.. (and wouldn't shut up!  ) but jon ga me a huggg!! Aww... i kno man awww. lol- god i'll shut up. (sse how annoying I get!?) love the alphabet!~~ALLiSoN~~ It's bad enough when he calls me Michelle, i dont need it from u too!! I wish I could get another hug-- but it's prolly a one time thing. Thanks to the three of you. Take Care, Sara |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
yoyoyo dont forget ne butt muncher!!!j/j liked it but no i didnt really no whut it was about lol but good write  |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Cathy..cathy, cathy. I guess you dont need to know then! lol thanks, ttyl |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Look, poetic goddess of whatever - don't flood the board and bring up posts which are old. Try responding to other poets as well instead of just your darling Cathy. You two are not the only people writing on here so feel free to be less self centered and a tad more considerate. ~AF~ Anti Lemming Crusader - Fight against the conformity! |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
She is allowed to post to whoevers poems she wants. I favor. But who doesn`t? LOL. Really tho. It int that big of a deal. I mean, cathy`s poems are good. SO it would help open other ppls eyes to read them. *Allison* |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
she replys to more poems than just mine be a little more observant next time and im not her "darling cathy"  |
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