Teen Poetry #6 |
My love for her. |
NeverSayDie Junior Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 39Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND |
I think that I am falling Deep in love with you. I can't control my heart Because it belongs to you. I'm not sure I can say it But I know that it is true. Each time I see you smiling My heart takes a leap. I think about you every day And even in my sleep. You may not know it quite yet but very soon you will. I'm try to express my love But my lips are still. I hope you can understand The words will come some day. But till then this poem must do What my word will say. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
this is such a beautiful poem! I can`t believe no one has replied to it! Keeep writing because u r an amazing writer!this poem discribed something i`m going through right now. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
This is so sweet! Whoever she is, she's extremely lucky. Good luck! I have a lizard, and his name is Jake. |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
Loved this times 1000000000000000000 ~*Azi*~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I echo the rest. Wonderful sentiment. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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LadyDracaWolf Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 73CA |
Wow. This is incredible. The words "I love you" have been echoed throughout the ages and are most beautifully expressed in poetry. And some poems really stick out. -This is one of them. |
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NeverSayDie Junior Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 39Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND |
Thank you very much everyone, I gave it to her last night. She was speechless. Thanks for all the compliments. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
NeverSayDie~ This is such a beautiful expression of your love. Sometimes we say it louder by NOT saying the words. I'm glad to hear that she 'was speechless'. Nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one a lot. I have felt this on a daily basis for the past 7 and a half years. Not necessarily about one girl, even though I have, but mainly about life in general. Sometimes a poem is all you can do, but sometimes a poem is all you'll ever need. Well done. This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'. |
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