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roxywrestlegirl04 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 74good ole DINWIDDIE |
in my life i am nothing nothing is all i will ever be i work so hard to please people but nothing is all they see i think i am living my life but my life is really living me im suffocating, i cant breathe it feels like im drowning in the deep blue sea in my life i am nothing nothing is all i will ever be |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
this one was awesome better than the first one "tears"!!!! |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Very dark, I normally don't like those, but this is very good. Keep going with it maybe? Sticks out and I like it. Woowoo! =-Laura-= Real friends are those who, when you feel you've made a fool of yourself, don't feel you've done a permanent job. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Nice work. I like "my life is living me." Very cool concept.  Parasite |
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roxywrestlegirl04 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 74good ole DINWIDDIE |
thanx again for the replies.....i really like hearing about how people react to my poetry......hope u like everything i else i am soon going to post!! LIZ |
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Jester Junior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 41The dark corners of your mind |
i really like the way you structured this. The two line stanzas really added to this peice. Thanx for the read! Jester I am your God, will you kill me now or shall I be continually suicidal? |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
good write. thanks for sharing. /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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