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Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2002-10-27 08:50 PM

I'm tricked into beliving i'm worthless,
By the lies you tell to my friends.
You feel joy by my suffering,
That isn't fair.
All the people you turn against me,
Your using.
I want to run away,
From you and the rest of my problems.
But I can't,
So i'm forced to be torchered.
One minute your my friend,
The next your not.
Do you possibly think that I can't see what your plan for me is?
You apologize to me,
But you never mean it.
You say it was all just a joke,
But your eyes tell me different.
I can't pretend anymore,
I can't sit here and pretent that your not hurting me.
I won't be manipulated,
Finally i'm free from you lies.
I realized the truth,
And it obviously isn't what you told me.
You can lie to everyone else,
But i'm the one who won't belive it.
I used to trust you,
But i don't anymore.
With all the backstabbing that you did,
Im surprized that anyone trusts you.
You tried to ruin my life,
It didn't work.
You try to turn everyone against me,
It isn't worth it.
But I can't figure out,
Why do you try to make everyone I care about hate me?
Because of you,
Most of them don't even care!

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

1 posted 2002-10-27 08:58 PM

I liked this one and I'm telling you the truth I thought that it was good all that about stabbing in the back I'm sure other people as well as me can really relate to some of the stuff you said in this poem.

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

2 posted 2002-10-28 11:00 AM

Pollita -

I liked a lot of this, especially the spelling of "torchered." Quite creative, brings flames and burning to mind.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

3 posted 2002-10-28 01:24 PM

Another Great!!! poem. keep writing

Darkness

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

4 posted 2002-10-28 04:43 PM

Aww than you everybody!

Local Parasite- Ya I liked the whole torchered thingy too!

Foreverwithyou- Im sure alot people can relate to the things i say and put in my poems...Ya I find it sad how people HAVE to backstab people.

Darkness- Thank you!...I'll keep writing!...don't worry....
THERE WILL ALWAYS BE MORE!

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