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foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

0 posted 2002-10-22 10:23 PM

People say we're crazy
That our love is way to strong
But how is it supposed to be when I've loved you for so long?
I don't know how you feel
But I hope it't the same way
Just kiss me now and let all the time fade away
And when you,leave your sweet kiss will still linger there
I'll remember how you ran your fingers through my hair.
Then you'll get down on one knee
Your beautiful eyes look up at me.
Then I'll know what my answer is.
No one can say I'm too young for this.
You'll propose
And I'll say yes
Then Together we'll be
Just you and me

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2002-10-22 10:27 PM

hey,
this poem was awesome!!!!
how long have u been writing!?!
anywayz this was a fantastic write
jolly good it was
KEEP WRITIN!!!!!!
~sam~

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-10-23 08:15 AM

This was good!

Ri

~*I'm not gonna say I'm gorgeous, that for you to decide, if you really wanna know me, see the world through my eyes*~

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-10-23 11:15 AM

This is cute. I enjoyed reading it.

Keep up the good work, and good luck in all of life's love adventures.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2002-10-23 01:25 PM

Didn't your friend get the guy, or is this about another one? I'm confoozled

Anyway, I did like this. Nicely done

This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'.

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

5 posted 2002-10-23 08:51 PM

thanks for postin to this one and as for who got the guy...well thats for you to decide.....

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

6 posted 2002-10-24 04:54 PM

I agree with dinks. Jolly good show! I like this one the best out of all of the ones u have written!!!! Good job! Keep writing!~!!

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

7 posted 2002-10-24 06:19 PM

Aww thats so cute! If this person is true I hope it comes to you. That would be so exciting!
Great job and what a good read
Laura~

Real friends are those who, when you feel you've made a fool of yourself, don't feel you've done a permanent job.

clumsy
Member

since 2002-10-10

Posts 106
canada.

8 posted 2002-10-25 04:52 PM

this poem made me smile. weee

good job

hehe.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

9 posted 2002-11-02 11:13 PM

CONFOOZLED!!
what a cool word!

I liked this cathy... pepppermints..
jon is hot!

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