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Baby_Angel123
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-10-19 08:07 PM

A Year

It's been a year,
and I can hardly,
believe it.

Nothing has changed,
it's just like the first,
day I met you.

For when I look at you,
all I can do is smile,
because i'm speachless,
and filled with butterflies.

I just hope,
this feeling never ends,
and that you and I,
will remain one,
forever!

If you love something, let it go, if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz. ~ DMX

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2002-10-19 08:39 PM

i really liked this poem of urs
thanx for the reply
i cant wait to see more

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

2 posted 2002-10-19 08:40 PM

when i said i cant wait to see more i meant of ur stuff just wanted to clear that up cuz when i read the reply again i realized that it kind of sounded like i wanted to see more replies
sry

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-10-19 08:40 PM

This is nice, Heather... very up-toned and positive...

I enjoyed reading it. nice work.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

4 posted 2002-10-19 08:43 PM

Great poem.
Isn't that a great feeling?

Bel

Devils Angel 666
Member

since 2001-11-30

Posts 71
CT, USA

5 posted 2002-10-19 08:45 PM

Love you babe
Happy one year!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2002-10-20 10:35 PM

It's good to feel that way, especially for a year. I like the implications of 'forever'. Not necessarily in the poem, but as a whole. Being as one forever, sounds harsh sometimes. But then again, if that's your thing then good for you hehe. I wish you the best of luck.

This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'.

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

7 posted 2002-10-21 12:36 PM

you know what's also a little neat?

you posted this VERY close to your one year pip anniversary. heh.

i really enjoyed this one. good write.

and i

the feeling of butterflies in my stomach. mmmmmm!! nothing better!!

i think we all can't wait to see more. ::grins::

/jen/

to give pleasure to a single heart by a single act is better than a thousand heads bowing in prayer. [ghandi]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2002-10-24 04:30 PM

Baby_Angel~
I very much enjoyed this read.
You've expressed the emotions very well,
and I couldn't help but smile.
Nicely done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (10-24-2002 04:32 PM).]

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

9 posted 2002-10-24 06:13 PM

Awww, Yay for you! Its soo exciting isn't it?
Thats great to hear and a great poem to tell about it.
WTG!

Real friends are those who, when you feel you've made a fool of yourself, don't feel you've done a permanent job.

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