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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
you dont know my name so i hide in shame i dont know exactly why i like you i hope the rumors arent true i dont care if they are anywayz there's somethin bout you thats got me in a daze a trance that wont let me go i just want you to know the way i feel about you the feelings are all so new i want you badly so i sit here sadly writing my confession it isnt an obsession, i just miss you |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
parasite, i know u said not to post so many so close together but i couldnt wait to post this one but i tryed to wait as long as i could so i just decided to post it i hope u guys like this one but if you dont just tell me cuz i want you to be honest |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Quit banging the phone againt the wall... or the clip board.. I ejoyed reading this piece. GOOD WRITE, MAN!!!!' Seriously. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
 (^^^who's that???)  (^^^who's that???) "he said 'you're beautiful, |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
YO YO YO WASSUP G!!! I loved this one. Good wotk. I can`t believe it! Go away! You make me look bad! LOL |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
it's smokey and the batman, right? |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Oh, and this poem - liked it... I like your ending, the stand-alone line that didn't have a real rhyme following it. Nicely done. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
It's an inside joke parasite.  sam... I'm like a [edited by moderator] one man band!!!!! Jack Black is the shizzzzz! [This message has been edited by quietlydying (10-20-2002 06:00 PM).] |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
* giggles * 'Ello  Fly like bird ( hyper woman sorry ) great job  Riley ~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~ |
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EleanorMoonbaby Member
since 2002-09-02
Posts 202England, UK |
Inward singing.... how cool is that? lol! And not a bad li'l poem. liked the rhyming couplets. Nice one. Ellie  "Last night, I had a dream that I went to the doctors, and she gave me eight minutes to live. I'd spent thirty minutes in the f***ing waiting room"- S |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
dude! Inward singing's the best, Ellie! And the other thing is- when he's singing in, it sounds even better than when he's singing out! Now Sam... I ejoyed this.. again, and again- and i'm sending it back to the top!!! Whooooppie! Right- anyway, weren't u gonna post those other things?? Do it!! "And the thing is.. is that when I'm singing in, it sounds even better-than when i'm singing out!!" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
VERY well written poem. I felt the pain in this one. Very nice.  This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'. |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
yoyo sam I liked this one man MUHAHAHA lol this was good!! |
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