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Teen Poetry #6

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colifer
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 37
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-21 02:46 AM

over over again i wait for you

to come into sight

to place your tricky eyes

in front of me.

and i ask "is this real?

could it really be, you and me

me and you," until i realize that

the rooms completely empty.

But I have been waiting

fifteen hours for this moment

and it comes in a second

just a second too late.

so i sit in my chair

and recollect about the times

when I almost made me cry

AND IT FEELS WONDERFUL.

so come on in, have a seat

and let me know what you think

and by the time we're done

WE'RE BOTH GONNA FEEL WONDERFUL.

cuz i'll sit in my chair

and recollect about the times

when i almost made me cry

and it'll feel wonderful.

and you'll stare with a smile

and with you're tears in my eyes

we'll just laugh, laugh, laugh...

and isn't it just wonderful.

i mean, it's really wonderfull

don't ya know it's wonderful

Why
Junior Member

since 2003-09-26

Posts 32
Middle of nowhere

1 posted 2003-09-26 09:36 PM

this is an inspiring poem.a close friend of mine was taken to a psychiatric ward for a stupid reason and this sounds much like my waiting. thank you for the beautiful poem

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