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baby1231
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since 2003-09-19
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0 posted 2003-09-20 07:07 PM



You may concider yourself
But you may very well be
A leader, a winner
For all the world to see

In the eyes of others
You are smarter
You have recieved recognition
And you have worked harder

But why? Why all the praise?
I have done nothing but kept my word
To a dear friend who needed me
In every incident that occurred

But friend, I tell you, you are a hero
You help me see the light

~~*ally d*~~

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mkcbf
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1 posted 2003-09-21 01:36 PM


That was very nice
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2 posted 2003-09-21 04:55 PM


Very nice! I look up to some of my friends as well.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Why
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3 posted 2003-09-26 09:30 PM


that was a very pretty poem it really touched me
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