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Olive_8
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since 2003-09-20
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0 posted 2003-09-20 11:31 PM


No matter what I tell myself
The pain won't go away
No matter what I try to think
The hurt will always stay

The more I try to help myself
To keep you out of mind
The more I seem to think of you
And your kiss that was so kind

I know we wern't together long
And that things just didn't work
You didn't even tell me face to face
Man you're such a jerk

I cried myself to sleep last nite
Wondering how you feel
Why did you change your mind last nite?
I'm still hoping this can't be real

I know you made up your mind
And there's one thing I can do
The only thing that's left for me
Is to get myself over you


[This message has been edited by Olive_8 (09-22-2003 06:34 PM).]

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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2003-09-21 04:53 PM


Getting over someone you love hurts! It's hard but you seem strong enough to do so, since you came to that conclusion by yourself. Best of luck and very good poem! Welcome to Passions!

~Elizabeth

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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
2 posted 2003-09-21 06:32 PM


Hey! This was a good choice for your first post. Great work and I can COMPLETELY relate to what you're saying. Heart break is an indescribable pain, in the end everything is gonna be alright...Anyways, great work! Hope to hear more from ya soon! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2003-09-21 06:58 PM


WOW! For your first post..this was great! Lots of people will tell you they can relate cuz more people than you think do go through this at least once in their life, myself included. So great job, welcome to Passions and I hope to see more!

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

Olive_8
Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 41
Canada
4 posted 2003-09-22 06:21 PM


I just wanted to say thanks for the encouragement to write more poems and that I am glad that I can share these with all of you guys. Writing poetry is something that I do a lot and I am glad if it can help someone else.
Why
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since 2003-09-26
Posts 32
Middle of nowhere
5 posted 2003-09-26 09:24 PM


i know what it feels like getting over love i never want to know it again but it still hurts. i loved that poem. thank you
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