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Teen Poetry #6

This is my generation

Paragon
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 114

0 posted 2003-09-18 08:47 AM

gasping for breath
grasping for purchase
grabbing in anguish
stabbing to vanquish
shaming to exalt
blaming to fault
sweetening with salt
running to halt
not looking to gawk
timidly playing hawk
wolfishly playing sheep
fighting to sleep
losing to keep
laughing to weep
rallying for peace
protesting for war
abstaining from virginity
feminine virility
potent sterility
distant familiarity
life of such disparity
this is my generation

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2003-09-18 10:45 PM

very deep, i can tell you spent a lot of time on the rhyming part...great job, i love it. =)

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

2 posted 2003-09-19 12:17 PM

The rhyming in this poem rocks, it was a really deep intresting poem

-ash

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-09-19 01:04 AM

I liked this one, so sad and so true.
Great job, thanks for sharing.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

Paragon
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 114

4 posted 2003-09-25 08:59 AM

actually I wrote the whole thing in a matter of minutes.

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