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Toasty
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since 2003-06-09
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my little hole in wisconsin

0 posted 2003-09-16 06:25 PM



who will fill me up
what will make me cry
when will I care
why do I die

when I look in my mirror
I see an empty space
calling out for something
when will I find my place

why do I ache so badly
for a love I just can't name
fleeing from my emotions
why can't I be the same

what will make me happy
and fill me with delight
chase away the darkness
what will make me light

who will be the one
to save me

when will I find the passion
to care

what will be the thing
that drives me

     why am I surrounded
yet noone is there?

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength."  -Francis de Sales.

© Copyright 2003 Patricia Clark - All Rights Reserved
magic_612
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since 2003-07-31
Posts 190
NB, Canada
1 posted 2003-09-16 08:31 PM


wow that made me speechless! I really liked it.. great job!
Toasty
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since 2003-06-09
Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin
2 posted 2003-09-17 07:59 PM


thanks!

~toasty

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength."  -Francis de Sales.

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