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Teen Poetry #6

Love: A Blurry Past

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2003-09-15 09:32 PM

My past is but a blur,
Once I could just grasp what I had,
I have been blinded by lies,
My trust was misused and thrown down the drain,
No longer will I be able to love,
It takes time they say,
Oh how I hope it does...

I seem to be moving on to sunnier days,
Slowly thinking less of you,
Rarely appearing,
At least for a short period of time,
Then you come right back,
Right back to haunt my thoughts and my dreams,
How cruel love can be...
Will it ever change?
Is there someone real for me?
Will another door open and let the other close?
Is there a true love waiting for me?

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

1 posted 2003-09-16 04:01 PM

I really liked this...because, well, I can relate. It's hard...but you have to 'take each day at a time' ( how much is THAT used?! ) So yeah, brighter days are ahead...love you.

~J.Lynn

**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

[This message has been edited by BabieDoll (09-16-2003 04:02 PM).]

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

2 posted 2003-09-16 08:28 PM

Wow, I really like this. It seems to be that, even though your writing has always been good, it's improving. This one was beautiful. It also hit home...quite hard. In any case...I loved this piece. Nice write. Loves.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

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