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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-09-14 03:22 PM


The pain is looking out-
Through my eyes.
Eternally trapped inside,
Reflecting all the lies.

A life of what once was,
How surreal.
I leave all that behind,
Its time for me to heal.

Tired of hating life,
What’s done is done.
Time to fight back,
No longer will I run.



"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (09-14-2003 03:23 PM).]

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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-09-14 03:57 PM


This was GREEEEEEEATTTT! LOL. It flowed really well and I like the message. Good work! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
2 posted 2003-09-14 08:19 PM


OOO, I like. Very inspiring. Nice job, dude. Awesome. Loves.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

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