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anya
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 393
London, UK

0 posted 2003-09-13 04:08 PM


For the end,
read the beginning.
Don't you know energy never dies
it simply shifts form.
Our cycle will begin again,
slightly slanted thats all.
I can't wait to see what we'll become,
how we're going to melt and merge together.
So it's time to be reborn again,
and once again it's just a change of state,
whats important, my love will stay the same.


© Copyright 2003 Anne Hegarty - All Rights Reserved
magic_612
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since 2003-07-31
Posts 190
NB, Canada
1 posted 2003-09-13 09:55 PM


this was really good, I like what you said in the first few lines. Great job, hope to hear more from you!
peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
2 posted 2003-09-13 10:13 PM


I like this...Good work. ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

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