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Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-09-11 08:58 PM

I want to be a color,
I don't care which one,
it's your call.
Something other then black.

The scent your hands leave along my skin,
it's addictive.
And I've got a silly smirk upon my face.
Rubber bands bolted to my cheeks.
Because your eyes are blue.

My eyes are yellow my hair is black.
There are evergrowing contrasts.
Label me.
I'm feeding off of your dead skin,
falling onto my red tonuge.
The one you finger painted that day.

I'm thinking of trading it in.
Grab some windex and just wipe me from your mirror.

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

1 posted 2003-09-12 05:07 PM

wow I really liked this one, great job!

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

2 posted 2003-09-12 06:12 PM

This was awsome!

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

3 posted 2003-09-13 04:12 PM

I love to read something different and this certainly was unique...there's an energy in this poem that really came through. Well done with this,
anya

[This message has been edited by anya (09-13-2003 04:14 PM).]

Toasty
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin

4 posted 2003-09-17 08:15 PM

interesting...there's so much energy in this. Descriptive and emotional. Keep up the good work.

~toasty

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales.

Jaime

Registered

Member
Posts 250

5 posted 2003-09-20 01:17 AM

I heart you, Lexy.

This is the kind of poem I love to read. Images, mixed meanings (perhaps some sexual undertones, or maybe thats just me), emotional yet not gushing, and devoid of overused poetics. Wonderful.

jaime.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

baby1231
New Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 7

6 posted 2003-09-20 10:45 AM

i loved this one

~~*ally d*~~

Why
Junior Member

since 2003-09-26

Posts 32
Middle of nowhere

7 posted 2003-09-27 05:06 PM

great poem. very original. im looking forward to more

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

8 posted 2003-09-29 10:36 AM

This is very different but i still like it.

Is it just me but aren't we terrorists as well.Going over seas just to aise some hell.

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