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Teen Poetry #6

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collarbone_girl
Junior Member

since 2003-07-14

Posts 45
Wonderland

0 posted 2003-09-10 05:45 PM

Little girl with night time hair
Is watching for Prince Charming
Thru muddy brown eyes

Lying on a bed of broken heart and paper roses,
Of torn up newspaper and dust

This little girl who could stand to eat a sandwich
This little girl
Who likes to walk thru the stars
And swim in the moon

Who leaves her hair wet
After the shower
And who wears fluffy jimmies
Even in the summer…

Prince Charming must be tall enough
to pull blossom
From the highest tress to decorate my hair

To whisk her away
To magic her tears to petals
And to draw her face in the sand

And have a heart big enough
to wrap round my
Angel waist

Ability to paint beautiful pictures
Worthy of love
With a few simple words

And eyes dark enough
To confuse sunrise and set

Some one on fire, for all the right reasons…

Apply in poetry to…

Each letter written wastes your hand young man, come lead me to your bed...

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-09-10 06:10 PM

This was a great poem! I've never read anything quite like it before...and I think that's why I like it so much. Yep, it's going in my library! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-09-11 08:21 PM

Yes. I love this. "on fire for all the right reasons." your words flew perfectly and gentley along the page.(screen) Comforting, but icy.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-09-11 11:36 PM

Im at a loss for words with this poem.
I don't quite know how to tell you how much it meant. It was very touching, and smooth, though sad.
I really love this one! Excellent job, thank you for sharing.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

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