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Teen Poetry #6

Bleed The Land

collarbone_girl
Junior Member

since 2003-07-14

Posts 45
Wonderland

0 posted 2003-09-04 05:56 PM

Looking through the nighttime sky,
As cars and rush and war drive by.
Melancholia sits and watches
Stars spattered lovingly roughly,
Shaped in freedom, un touched my fear,
She slowly drops a longing tear.

Staring down through the clouds,
At silent, painful raging crowds.
Cassiopeia listens and sees
Man, wasting away their years,
Etched in shadow, stained by gray,
She quietly waits for the day.

For dawn means money, work and time,
Businessmen cheating on their wives,
Children tip-toeing through the streets
Knowing only weak defeat.
Dust and death fall quick and fast,
Love and nature fade to past.

Melancholia, silent and thoughtful,
Cassiopeia, ever watchful,
Both so different through space and time,
Both so magnificent in certain rhyme.
But both locked in involuntary alliance,
Bound and named and chained by science.

Each letter written wastes your hand young man, come lead me to your bed...

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2003-09-04 06:37 PM

I really liked this one. Thanks for sharing, and nice job.

I hate everything about you!
Why do I love you?
You hate everything about me!
Why do you love me?~3 Days Grace

cuda04
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 46
Wisconsin,USA

2 posted 2003-09-04 10:08 PM

great job, keep working hard

Always look forward, never look back, dreams are much more refreshing than regrets.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2003-09-12 12:20 PM

hmmm,
crazy interesting, i really liked it...nice use of astrology and whatnot. thanks for sharing

-bergundy

i am so full of love, i am so full of hate. i am so full of these feelings that tear me every which way. -BHC

"when i grow up, i want to be a rocke

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