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Teen Poetry #6

Pass Along The Pain

Obsolete
Junior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 43

0 posted 2003-09-03 01:31 AM

A new found personality,
the quick laughter following
You seem amazed,
but Dear..
It is who I am
Deep down,
I ponder what I'll do
My kindness exists,
true it remains

But still I fear,
that the same wreck I had..
I'll put you in

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-09-03 06:54 PM

hmmm...yes. This was good, it was meaningful, but not the best I've read from you. It's great none the less. You form your words with gentle conviction.

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

2 posted 2003-09-05 09:20 AM

Nice write.

I am the one, the only, Blue~Phoenix. That is who I am now and forever shall be from this point forward.

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