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Kandi
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell

0 posted 2003-09-02 12:07 PM


I usually don't post 2 in one day, but these just kind of poured out in the last 10 minutes. Neither of them are that good, but you can't really embellish what so desperately needs to be said. Sorry I'm not up to par.


I'm not a world traveler.
I'm not the ghost of relationship past.
I'm not haunting.
I'm not political.
I'm not going anywhere.
I'm not interested in breaking you.
I'm not blonde.
I'm not an impressive conversationalist.
I'm not sleeping down the hall.
I'm not your inspiration.
I'm not artistically striking.
I'm not a box of assorted memories.
I'm not intimidating.
I'm not charming.
I'm not witty.
I'm not laughing...
I'm not cold.
I'm not what pushes you.
I'm not getting under your skin.
I'm not running through your mind.
I'm not a challenge.
I'm not stunning.
I'm not critical.
I'm not gone.
I'm not enticingly complicated.
I'm not intoxicatingly distant.
I'm not going to be your next best thing.
I'm not kidding.
I'm not her.

[This message has been edited by Kandi (09-02-2003 12:58 AM).]

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yankees01rugby
Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48
USA
1 posted 2003-09-02 10:12 AM


this was a pretty good write...i like the meesage in it!!

Love is like quicksand, the deeper you fall the harder it is to get out

Manth88
Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 45
IL, USA
2 posted 2003-09-02 06:58 PM


Hey I like the poem. Great Write!!

!^*Manth88*^!

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