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collarbone_girl
Junior Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 45
Wonderland

0 posted 2003-08-31 04:23 PM



This is the song for us
For them
For all the  anarchists that
Stay up all night
That create the hovel that we are
We will be
And will never stop
The nighttime cloaks our motives
And the sun burns our
Blood white rose bled skin
So pour your eyes to me
To us
To all the (edited by Moderator) kids that hang on the street corners
And never end the chaos
That haunts the alleyways and the corners
Filled with shadows and
Disturbing silences
Watch the drive bys as they scream infidelity down the streets
Breaking our eyes with horror filled smiles
And cursed eyes
That bite the very thing we rely on everyday
To keep this path straight with bends
To cover every flaw and every scar
To paint our faces with white paste and dance in the streets
To be who we are and are not
To forget the hollows of our cheek bones
And the holes in our teeth
Filled with the silver from stolen Jews
Somewhere in the chamber a child cries
For justice, for love, for life and wiles
But they know that the end is the end
And that the beginning will never fail to fail
And will never end to begin
So this cloud that wanders through your head and your smiles
And makes you float over all the cries and blue tears your
Black eyes cried last night
In the shivers of this
Sugar footed sweat soaked sun burnt
Angel.





Each letter written wastes your hand young man, come lead me to your bed...

[This message has been edited by Masked Intruder (08-31-2003 09:51 PM).]

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BabieDoll
Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE
1 posted 2003-08-31 04:37 PM


WHOA...this was GOOD! I'm glad I decided to read this one! GREAT write!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

magic_612
Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190
NB, Canada
2 posted 2003-08-31 05:36 PM


very good job.. I really enjoyed it
*Belabebeautiful*
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since 2003-01-03
Posts 696
washington, USA
3 posted 2003-09-02 03:16 AM


...I'm speachless...
~Live and Laugh~

The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again
~Bella~

BrokenDreams
Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
4 posted 2003-09-02 04:55 PM


wow...just...wow

"To handle yourself, use your head; to handle others, use your heart." -Donald Laird

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