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Manth88
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since 2003-06-15

Posts 45
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-08-31 12:18 PM

Wow can it be true?
Am I really over you?
That is great, I mean fantastic,
I am literally spastic.
If I could redo?
I would not fall for you.
And you know thats right,
B/c all we did was fight.
I am saying goodbye,
B/c I found the right guy.
He is so sweet to me,
And I feel really free.
So you had your chance,
Oh yeah you also had a glance.
Still hope were friends,
All the way to the end.

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1 posted 2003-08-31 01:01 AM

it's a great feeling, getting to that "over you" part....enjoyed this read

magic_612
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since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

2 posted 2003-08-31 08:57 AM

really good poem, thanks for the read

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

3 posted 2003-08-31 01:51 PM

good job sam! I like! I like! Keep up the good writing!

brezee
Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 140

4 posted 2003-09-01 07:43 PM

Good one sammy wammy,i'll be lookin forward to ur next write, nice job

~*~*brezee*~*~

Alnilam
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since 2003-07-04

Posts 75

5 posted 2003-09-01 07:57 PM

GREAT! i love this and the sentiment it represents. Amazing! Truly Amazing!

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

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