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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-08-28 05:36 PM


I know you're wrong,
But why can't you see it?
You accuse me of something,
I don't even know about?!
You want everyone to bow down at your feet,
Well you can trash that idea,
'Cuz it'll NEVER HAPPEN.
You act like you're the only one,
Who ever gets hurt by things.
This friendship was impossible.
How am I supposed to know what I did wrong,
IF YOU WON'T TELL ME?
So I'll leave it at that.

I'm sorry it had to end this way. Truely, I am.

I hate everything about you!
Why do I love you?
You hate everything about me!
Why do you love me?~3 Days Grace

© Copyright 2003 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
BabieDoll
Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE
1 posted 2003-08-28 05:54 PM


Great poem, girl...then again, all of your work is good. I especially liked the very last 2 lines...good write!

Love ya!

~J.Lynn

*I haven't been able to write in a while...IT SUCKS!!!!!*

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

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