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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Hearing all your criticism, How I do everything wrong… Whats the use in trying any more, If all I do is make you sad. Wishing I could mean something to you, That we could just be a family once again. Its always my fault, No matter what is the problem… Your image of me, Isn’t the thing I wish it were. I guess I have myself to blame, For us not loving each other. I want a family, That I can come home and be thankful for. But no, when I grow up, Im going to be a better parent then you ever were. Im not going to make my child think she was worthless, That she didn’t mean a thing. Im not gonna make her cry at night, Like you have done to me... * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * [This message has been edited by Pollita (08-28-2003 11:01 PM).] |
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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
great write! that is EXACTLY how i feel about my family. thanks for expressing those feelings so prefectly.  Love is like quicksand, the deeper you fall the harder it is to get out |
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poems_rocks_01 New Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1 |
hey delaney, you are the best poet ever!!!you should be a poet when you are older (i am so serious)(not joking at all)you know you need to teach me how to write like that...... k talk to you later bye byes from your friend christina |
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