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Trapped Me
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Trapped Me |
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Krystin18 Junior Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 20Ontario, Canada |
Your relentless silence mocks me, What the hell just happened? Spare me the piercing gaze of your eyes, I cannot handle being breath taken again. Feeling your arms caress me, How could I ever live without you? I am foolish to think that I could escape you, You control me though I'm ashamed to admit it. Tasting your sweet kisses, How could I ever love kissing someone else? You envelope me in your web, Wether your telling the truth, Or a thousand lies. You know it doesnt matter becuase you own me, I am nothing unless I am with you . Master, Sir, Lover, Executioner, Which would you prefer to be called? I'm pathetic and everyone can see it, Even myself, Can't lift the trance you have over me, This love is blind, I am yours forever, Heart, soul, body and mind. Your property, Your little play toy, Feel free to use me then throw me away. What else am I good for? Take advantage of my love for you, Cheat on me, Abuse me. What do you care if I cry? What do you care if i feel? What do you care if I bleed? I am nothing to you, You are everything to me. You are my cage, My prison, You've trapped me. Put me on display as the girl that you tore apart piece by piece and forgot to put back together. [This message has been edited by Krystin18 (08-23-2003 11:46 AM).] |
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sixington Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 53Utah |
This is so sad. I really liked the free form in this one, i thought it added a lot. it made me think, it made me sad, but i still think it was well written ~ Amanda |
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Krystin18 Junior Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 20Ontario, Canada |
hhehe sorry it made you sad... the free form is part of the point in the poem.... basically how the girl who wrote the poem cant think straight because of this guy ... so it even effects her writing.. im glad you liked it  thanx Put me on display as teh girl that you tore apart piece by piece and forgot to put back together. |
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