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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
You broke, My trust, When you gave, Into your lust. Have you lost your mind? Have you gone insane? Is this a cruel joke? Don’t you have a brain? I thought, I tried, But still, You lied. So I guess that was it, Your attempt to hurt me? You’re just mad, ‘cuz what I am, Is something you will NEVER BE! You may have – Left me scarred. But that was all, It wasn’t hard, To get over you. I can’t wait, To see you fall. So now I watch and wait, And during that time, This feeling of hate, Keeps growing in my mind. "Is there anyone out there cause it's getting harder and harder to breathe"~Maroon 5~ |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
this was not a cool experience if it was a real life one, if so im sorry, but the poem is really good. isnt it weird how the things that hurt us can bring out the best writings??? If I could offer you only one tip for the future, sunscreen would be it. |
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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
this is a great write...i am sorry that this person did this to you...i have felt the same way about a friend of mine and this is definatly about how you feel.  *It's hard to tell your mind to stop lovin someone when your heart still does* |
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