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fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2003-08-17 04:15 AM

arrogance is a gift,
that i use well.
maybe for awhile,
i let you believe,
that i could love you.
but darling,
i'm better then you'll ever be.
it's cute how you think,
you're too good for me.

don't you realize,
that your words mean nothing?
quit trying to hurt me,
it's pointless to attempt,
what you can't succeed.
do you think that you
have what it takes,
to demean me??

i will take pity on you,
and give you some advice.
run
run far away little boy,
unless you want to bleed.
because your antics ceased to be amusing,
long ago.
to put it in simple words,
that your tiny little brain,
can comprehend,
i have the power to destroy you,
piece by piece,
i'll tear you apart,
and only look back,
wearing a smile,
or maybe an amused laugh.
there'll be no remorse or pity,
you will see,
soon you'll be,
just another random guy to me.

no one can make you feel inferior, unless you let them.--eleanor roosevelt

Xelorz
Junior Member

since 2003-08-16

Posts 10
Burlington, Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2003-08-17 09:37 AM

I like the originality of the subject. It flows well except the last paragraph seems to have a stutter.

~Xelorz

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-08-17 11:15 AM

This was very interesting to me because it seems that most of the poems I have read are from teh other point of view, the one that has been used and tormented. this was a rereshing change, and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for the read.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

Krystin18
Junior Member

since 2003-01-19

Posts 20
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2003-08-17 12:32 PM

i really liked this poem.. very unique

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

4 posted 2003-08-19 05:38 PM

WHEW! Revenge, girl... REVENGE!!!

Tell it to 'em like it is.

Nice job.

-Lioness

Jaime

Registered

Member
Posts 250

5 posted 2003-08-24 09:30 PM

Ohh.. another eight, another patch of black and red. I can appreciate this poem a great deal, since I have often been in this position myself. (and some others) It's nice to see this. Relief. You also wrote it well, like you were speaking directly to him, and I am some nosey woman listening in.

jaime.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

jaime.

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

6 posted 2003-08-25 01:41 AM

I really like this one!

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

Rise of Truth
Member

since 2003-07-12

Posts 59
Beneath the Fury Sun

7 posted 2003-08-28 06:54 PM

Words of hurt from just another random girl.

Which is more the cause of the ripple, the pebble or the water?

Manth88
Junior Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 45
IL, USA

8 posted 2003-08-31 01:52 PM

Great write. I like all your poems. Thanx for putting such good poems on here. Keep them up!!

!^*Manth88*^!

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