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The Kiss
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The Kiss |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
The Kiss You moved close, and finally at last that amazing kiss It happened so fast. Your soft gentle lips brushed against my mouth made my body shiver, and shattered all my doubts. I fell for you instantly and I knew we'd be together but no matter what the future holds, I'll remember that kiss forever. Well this is the first poem I posted up here, I was a little newvous to post at first, but I hope you guys liked it. I wrote this one for my bf the day after our first kiss. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Aww! This was SO sweet! Good work! ~Jess  "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
um..well this was good. A little hopelssly blind. But me and love don't get along too well, so I think I will leave the room.  |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
well I'm sorry you felt it was 'blind' , I do appreciate your reply though. I guess I can't help how I feel, I'm sorry you havent had much luck with love, but I am happy and that poem fit the situation perfectly. Thanks for reading  |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
This was so sweet. I loved it. It really captured my first kiss that i will remember forever as well. Thx for the read. A life without love…is no life at all. |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
This poem is good...a little naive, but still, very good. Hope to see more from you... ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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