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Evolve II |
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Imajica Junior Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 14NM, USA |
We evolve and go mad Destroy the time and loose the lesson We believe we will survive We are superior We are indestructable We are blind Today, we live the end |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
The ending line is a bit hard for me to grasp. I took it to mean, "today we live the end" of evolution, which means that we are as advanced as we will ever become. So today, we live in the end of advancement. I disagree with this, if it truly is the message of the poem. There is so much more evolution to be done in our society, we have yet to master physics, metaphysics, and such things. We've barely scratched the surface of the end. There's so much out there that once we conquer the physical world, we're only halfway done. Allan All images begin in mirrors and end inside our subconsious. ~Genesis P-Orridge, "Thee Reversal of Fate" [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (09-17-2002 02:57 PM).] |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
I took it to mean that it was the end of believing we are superior, indestructible. However, I could very well be wrong...  Kielo |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I agree with Kielo... although, what we think is probably way off base, eh?  I have a lizard, and his name is Jake. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
....interesting.... I read this as being war- or something. I'm going to have to come back to it later. Are you scared? BOO! Are you now? |
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NeverSayDie Junior Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 39Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND |
Whats all this thinking going on. J/K I like the poem but im a little confused on the meaning. But yeah its probably just me. |
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