Teen Poetry #6 |
Everything Will Work Just Fine.. |
Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I like to chew on wear out the strings.. Yeah, they kept us together but.. Together isn't such a calmly spoken word between us. I wish for you.. the best..yes.. that's what I said. And perhaps a final goodbye would work just fine.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ohhhhhhhh my! This is my life right now... Oh that final goodbye would be so sweet...but still he calls...even though he is now married and I am seeing someone else...sigh This was like a punch in the gut! Excellent! Susan |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Wow, this is exceptonally good. So lightly written but with so much meaning. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Oh my...this poem was great! I REALLY like this. The whole concept...the way you worded it, how it flowed...everything! Awesome! I'm definitely going to be looking for some more of your work! Nice! "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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