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Teen Poetry #6

Smirk

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

0 posted 2003-07-28 11:55 AM

I smirk at the sight of you.
Your braces, your acne, your height, your glasses.

I am a typical student,
With a typical smirk.

Now I see another,
I laugh at their nose,
I laugh at their teeth.

Oh, wait that's a mirror,
Never mind.

Smirk.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-07-28 01:17 PM

This was so good. I loved it, so true. It is ridiculos to laugh at other ppls. physical feautures..as if they have control over them..lol. great poem.
~Lex..

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2003-07-28 01:22 PM

cute!

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-07-28 02:25 PM

ha ha finally some one admits the truth. woohhhhaaaaaa. good onnneeeeee.

MoniDaPoet
Member

since 2003-08-14

Posts 73
California, USA

4 posted 2003-08-14 04:05 PM

I hope all people can read this and take a lesson. it's good to point out your own beautiful flaws and embrace them. Great write!

I have only my genius to declare!

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-08-14 04:35 PM

Hmm, acne likes to follow me around..but i'd never have the courage to admit my faults..
So I just insult the whole me.

You're just fine, love..just fine.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

6 posted 2003-08-14 09:32 PM

Ooo...I like this. It's not very often you hear someone admitting their OWN flaws. Nice job...

But I do believe you're just fine, my dear!

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