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| Teen Poetry #6 |
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yet again another untitled |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa 
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I am the odd man out once I walk out that door Somethings different in me that people can't ignore I try to stand up for whats right even if it loses me friends I have a heart for the people that we usually walk by I am not one to stand silent Even if your telling me to shut up people might say I live for today maybe thats true, but past today I look to how it wil affect future kids I want to be the voice for the voiceless I will scream and shout for them till my own voice is gone This world when live in is crooked the good people go punished I am not one you can cast to the ground and expect me not to get up I cry freedom from this world This world means nothing to me I spit at your feet I might as well and spit in your face This world will not knock me out I will play until the last round lets see whos the last one standing " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
ooo...nice ending. So strong and confident. Someone who hasn't lost hope. I must say I admire your spirit. Great piece.  |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I agree with Lexy. This is a very strong and confident speech. And I, too, enjoyed how you chose to end this. I think I will start looking for more of your work...I have definitely taken a liking to it. I really like the message you are conveying in this particular piece. It's quite inspiring. Nice work! "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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