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SumdayUwillAcheLikeIache
Junior Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 10
0 posted 2003-08-13 03:13 AM

God dreams of truth
Beneath his silken canopy he weeps
"What have I done?"
Watching his creationself destruct
Before the aquarian age
Running around like ants,
The sons of adam cannot understand
Why Eve ate the fruit
Ignorance is bliss
         They Say
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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2003-08-13 06:04 PM

ohhhh...this is wow, really nicely done. One of thoses "slap in the face" poems. I liked it and welcome. Like a science experimet gone wrong..
Lex

[This message has been edited by Lexy (08-13-2003 06:05 PM).]
Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2003-08-13 08:21 PM

good write, welcome to passions!

Tequilia
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