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Teen Poetry #6

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wicka_basket
Junior Member

since 2003-08-11

Posts 12

0 posted 2003-08-11 11:12 PM

When i was just a young girl, younger then i am now,
i did my own little things and didnt think about boys some how.
But now that im a bigger girl
and mumma took away my toys
i got more time to think
about the bigger boys.
and its kinda funny how
i use to turn and hide,
but now that im a bigger girl
my mouth drops open wide
I use to look to the eyes
and run as fastas i could
now i look lower down
and wonder if i should!
and i know i use to hate you and you probably felt the same
but now that we are older its a different love game
I think that your ok now
i think that your alright
and i was just wondering...
are you available tonight?

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-08-12 12:17 PM

Im not a chick but nice poem. It gets the point out.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

2 posted 2003-08-12 03:35 AM

this was a good piece. keep witing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-08-12 12:37 PM

This was cute but totally real. I liked it.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

4 posted 2003-08-12 01:19 PM

This was cute and humorous in some parts, but still totally true, nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2003-08-13 08:38 PM

very cute

Tequilia

[This message has been edited by Tequilia_Sunrise (08-13-2003 08:39 PM).]

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