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Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-12 02:47 PM

She lives as someone else. She keeps it all
inside. She doesn't want to talk. She needs
to run and hide. As herself she's shy. As
their friend she's wild. With them she
doesn't care. Within she is a child. She's
scared of truth and light. She hides herself
in dark. She lives behind her lies. She's
lost all of her spark. Her life is somewhat
twisted. She experiments with things. She
tries to fly away from it. She thinks that
she has wings. She wants to live a normal
life. Though she knows not what that is.
She tries to hide the hurting. Friends don't
notice this. I met her once before. I asked
myself, "who's she?" Now comes to me the
answer. The introvert is me.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-08-12 05:30 PM

She wants a normal life, though she knows not what that is. Good line. And a great poem. Yes I myself am an introvert.

[This message has been edited by Lexy (08-12-2003 08:30 PM).]

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-08-12 09:53 PM

Im glad you enjoyed it, thankx for the comments

Tequilia

Alnilam
Member

since 2003-07-04

Posts 75

3 posted 2003-08-12 10:07 PM

i really liked this...it flows beautifully and lets the words express themselves. great write. i totally relate too...

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2003-08-14 02:27 PM

Alnilam, im glad you enjoyed it. Thankx

Tequilia

"I went to the woods to live deliberatly, to front only the essential facts of life, and see if i could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-08-30 06:03 PM

Boy do I understand this!

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

6 posted 2003-08-30 11:41 PM

really good work, hope to read more of your poetry soon

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2004-07-05 02:36 AM

thankx everyone for your lovely comments

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

8 posted 2004-07-09 10:17 PM

*Thumbs up*

A unique write, different structure and beautiful flow. You should be proud of this one. Thanks for sharing.

"Be the Change you wish to see in the world" -Ghandi

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