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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-08-12 11:28 AM



Out of nowhere,
Comes a thought of you.
A wave of sadness swept over me,
As I remember what you said.

So I cry into the night,
Hoping that you’ll hear me.
        But it echoes back-
        Always the same.

Writing this by candle light,
I hear your voice in my head
Singing worse you said in the past,
But only silence touches my ears.

So I cry into the night,
Hoping that you’ll hear me.
        But it echoes back-
        Always the same.

I wish you could hear me now,
Whispering your name.
I wish you would hold me now,
Keep me safe from the world.

So I cry into the night,
Hoping that you’ll hear me.
        But it echoes back-
        Always the same….

Always…Always the same…
        …No Answer….


"Is there anyone out there cause it's getting harder and harder to breathe"~Maroon 5~

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (08-12-2003 11:31 AM).]

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frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23
Posts 268
my own special world
1 posted 2003-08-12 01:21 PM


I love this one,  I am having the same problem so I can really relate to it,  nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
2 posted 2003-08-12 05:32 PM


hmmm..this is was good, touching and sad.

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