Teen Poetry #6 |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Out of nowhere, Comes a thought of you. A wave of sadness swept over me, As I remember what you said. So I cry into the night, Hoping that you’ll hear me. But it echoes back- Always the same. Writing this by candle light, I hear your voice in my head Singing worse you said in the past, But only silence touches my ears. So I cry into the night, Hoping that you’ll hear me. But it echoes back- Always the same. I wish you could hear me now, Whispering your name. I wish you would hold me now, Keep me safe from the world. So I cry into the night, Hoping that you’ll hear me. But it echoes back- Always the same…. Always…Always the same… …No Answer…. "Is there anyone out there cause it's getting harder and harder to breathe"~Maroon 5~ [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (08-12-2003 11:31 AM).] |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
I love this one, I am having the same problem so I can really relate to it, nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hmmm..this is was good, touching and sad. |
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