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Teen Poetry #6

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wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2003-08-12 01:20 AM

*written after finding out a friend died and after I lost three of my closest friends due to stupid pride and words*

I am coming to find the dark cloud in humanity
How someone soul can grow so dark
When did man come to find that they can make people believe they can control human lives?
A bitter tongue can do so much.
It can tear a soul and can erase a life
To be apart of this race and to contribute rips me apart inside
such a worthless life
to know that you can be hurt at any moment
unhappy ending surrounds us all
as we walk on this earth
unending torment whirling in our ears
where in gods name is my silver lined cloud

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-12 06:59 PM

I hear ya, loud and clear..

the world is ..well, I can't say it here.

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-08-13 10:03 PM

"When did man come to find that they can make people believe they can control human lives?"

love this line, great write.
thank-you

Tequilia

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2003-08-13 10:05 PM

amazing

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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