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My Realization Aggravation... |
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HeroicVillan Junior Member
since 2002-11-09
Posts 34Lost..... |
i have always wondered who you really are it handed me a chance to heal up my scars im closer to you now than i got in the start you just dove right in so you could tear me apart well its over for now and you got your own way it all ended too fast and im the one who'll pay this poem's not about you screw it all, i dont care this wasnt ur fault its life thats not fair Dont blame others just because its their fault, or else you'll start blaming yourself because its not.... |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great writing HV, I really enjoyed the read  Andy |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
I love you message in this poem! great write. Thank-you Tequilia |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I agree with Tequilia...nice message you're conveying. I enjoyed this poem. Thanks for the read. "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." [This message has been edited by SilentTears (08-15-2003 10:30 PM).] |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
this was really good up until the lst stanza, I guess it just rubbed me the wrong way. Good point you make. |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
I really like the quote you used at the end, very true. |
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