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Teen Poetry #6

Out of reach.

Miserable Static
New Member

since 2003-08-04

Posts 3

0 posted 2003-08-06 04:25 PM

I could understand
On a busy lunch time
When the lights were bright
Why you would
But not today
When we locked our eyes
And then you turned away.

-MS-

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-08-06 05:05 PM

ohhh...that was good. I hate when people look at you and then look away. Good piece.

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

2 posted 2003-08-07 10:46 PM

Very good although it could be expanded a bit, but it works like it is now.

Lex

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

3 posted 2003-08-08 10:29 PM

Short...but to the point. This was very good. BTW: I like your post name.

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

4 posted 2003-08-09 08:47 AM

An interesting read, thanks for sharing it with us

Andy

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