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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
He was Dazzled by the light of beginning, now dazzled by the light of end. which caused him to be forgotten by everyone, even those who once called him friend. now castaway and bitter he sorrowfully mourns his fate as he remembers his past and awaits the final date. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Alnilam Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75 |
Jeremiah, So, sometimes I wonder how people can write what I feel and I can never even explain myself. Once again, I found myself wondering that when I read this. I like it alot. Good job.  ~*Alnilam*~ |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
seems like a familiar feeling.. I like how you wrote this. Keep it up |
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Lach Pahtai New Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 5Spring Hill Fl |
Guess this is how I can read your new stuff. Sounds good, as always Be happy while you're alive, for you'll be a long time dead |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
I remember well a time when i could write back to you in verse but now i seem to have lost my inspiration...good write...i miss you i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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