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Teen Poetry #6

Your Inner Place

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-08-06 03:17 AM

You know that feeling when walk into a pole
Wam, it hits you right in the face
That was the feeling I got
When I had walked into this place

It was something I had never seen
It had depth carter and no white walls
As you stand looking in from the doorway
You’d have to be dead not to hear its calls

It beckoned you to come closer
To marvel at the way it was made
A uniqueness that stood strong and firm
And with time would never fade

You could sit and look for hours
Always seeing something new
You could speak your mind aloud
With anything said, it would never judge you

This is what happened when talking to you
Sitting nowhere face to face
I never want to leave this nirvana
That happens to be your inner place

[This message has been edited by Deep_Inside (08-07-2003 09:17 PM).]

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2003-08-07 11:36 AM

hmm wonder why nobody replied to this yet...its a great piece

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends. Godsmack

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

2 posted 2003-08-08 01:25 PM

Very interesting. I like it.

Lex

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

3 posted 2003-08-09 04:13 PM

Different but very intriguing when you start to read it, then it all comes together at the end, I really liked this one.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

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