Teen Poetry #6 |
Love Letter |
BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
Reading through old love letters, A certain one catches my eye. Curious, I open it And at that moment I regret ever doing so. Emotions overflow my mind Making me wonder all the “What Ifs” As I read each line Of the poem you wrote me So very long ago. The words speak true of love and desire, A passion too wild to tame. Frivolous love making In the darkness of night. Young lovers in their own nirvana. When finally I reach the end, Tears slowly blur my eyes. For I have never forgotten you Or the way we once were... You were my first love. * "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
I loved your poem, its sweet, and well writtin...Hopefully, everything is okay. *huggles* things'll get better...hopefully * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
true love...I doubt it. If it was true it would have stayed. good poem though. ~Lex |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Ohhh, this was a great one! Lots of emotion! Good work! ~Jess "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
You know what the scary part of this is? I just did this yesterday. I'm moving all my stuff into a new room and I came across a letter that my first love had written to me just becuase he was thinking about me and wanted to say I love you. I barely made it to the end before I cried. So this piece defintly brought tears to my eyes, well done, full of emotion and a nice write ~Live and Laugh~ The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i enjoyed reading this piece, it had a lot to say. life will get better over time that is something to count on but you have to be prepared for those times that things turn the other way. well good luck and keep writing when you live you begin to die |
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