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Ripples of Madness
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Ripples of Madness |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
On the brink of madness I sit in quiet acquiescence Watching the sun fade to red A confused wind Blows against my body Trying, perhaps, to blow away the tarnish But this blind fury cannot be erased It lingers upon my soul With undying devotion Waiting for an outlet to my mind I seek reprieve from it’s hunger Devouring my spirit Sick of this tension Weighing upon my shoulders I must find the entity To take away the rage Before it consumes me And spills forth to the world But how to stop the waves of this entrapment? And the chaos of the question Is nothing to the silence of the answer The decimating illusion From which I flee, Running to a void of nothingness Where my mind can float Upon the ripples down the river forever free From this lunatic torment Until it becomes non-existent Then I may seek peace There, where my essence is safely spent The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again |
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Kaydo Junior Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 17Washington, USA |
I'm tired and can't think of any big or fancy words, so i'll just say that its a GREAT poem hun! I swear if I could only read one authors writing's it would be your poetry! You really have a gift sweetie. Cherish it and never stop writing. For two reasons, 1. Your writing ROCKS! and 2. I wouldn't have anything to read... Lots of love! Your honey bear! |
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Song_for_Serenity Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 97USA |
Great poem! I sense tension... who needs a hug? You do! *Hugs Bella until she can't breathe* This was a very emotional and intense read. I really like it. My next favorite of yours behind Evening's DanceKeep it up!  ~Angela |
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