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lauren03
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since 2002-01-04
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oh, usa

0 posted 2003-08-02 11:53 PM


Anger

here alone i sit again

                 pist and hurt

           my fist i want to dig in a wall
                        
                         my home is no exception

      my  life is full of anger and disbelief
  
nothing to believe in, no one to believe in

                     i've lost hope in all around me

   someone find me a rope to pull me up


        friends turn their backs without explanation

                     unseen tears burn my eyes

understanding is foreign

         why is this happening?

i don't even know what i'm writing...............

© Copyright 2003 lauren - All Rights Reserved
Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
1 posted 2003-08-03 01:43 AM


lots of anger lots of it. this feeling tares up not only things around you but you inside. i really hope this righting helps get this out it's not a good thing to live with i hope you feel better

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

2 posted 2003-08-03 09:09 PM


hatred says "good write"
lauren03
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since 2002-01-04
Posts 64
oh, usa
3 posted 2003-08-03 09:27 PM


thanks for the replies, i really appreciate them, i'm having a difficult time right now. thanks again
Pollita
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since 2002-07-25
Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity
4 posted 2003-08-04 01:23 AM


Good write! hope to see more from you in the near future. *huggles*
you'll get thru it, whatever doesnt kill you only makes you stronger...eh...thats mayjor bs...I just wanted to quote something. anyways, Im always here if you need a friend.
*smiles*

* A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey *

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
5 posted 2003-08-04 01:47 AM


*Sigh* I can relate to this poem so well.
Excellent write, it got the feeling across well.
If ever you need to just vent at someone, feel free to email me, sometimes it helps.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
6 posted 2003-08-04 04:28 PM


yeah. wow, this hit me hard. I'm sorry. the last line...I always wonder that. Writing to me is always a desperate attempt to get something out that I can't seem to say aloud. Thanks for sharing. I hope things improve.
~Lex

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