Teen Poetry #6 |
anger |
lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
Anger here alone i sit again pist and hurt my fist i want to dig in a wall my home is no exception my life is full of anger and disbelief nothing to believe in, no one to believe in i've lost hope in all around me someone find me a rope to pull me up friends turn their backs without explanation unseen tears burn my eyes understanding is foreign why is this happening? i don't even know what i'm writing............... |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
lots of anger lots of it. this feeling tares up not only things around you but you inside. i really hope this righting helps get this out it's not a good thing to live with i hope you feel better when you live you begin to die |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
hatred says "good write" |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
thanks for the replies, i really appreciate them, i'm having a difficult time right now. thanks again |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Good write! hope to see more from you in the near future. *huggles* you'll get thru it, whatever doesnt kill you only makes you stronger...eh...thats mayjor bs...I just wanted to quote something. anyways, Im always here if you need a friend. *smiles* * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
*Sigh* I can relate to this poem so well. Excellent write, it got the feeling across well. If ever you need to just vent at someone, feel free to email me, sometimes it helps. WinterWren |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
yeah. wow, this hit me hard. I'm sorry. the last line...I always wonder that. Writing to me is always a desperate attempt to get something out that I can't seem to say aloud. Thanks for sharing. I hope things improve. ~Lex |
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