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Teen Poetry #6

I Wish I Were You

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-08-02 12:41 PM

I want to see things through your eyes,
So I can see what you love and despise,
I want to feel your feelings for me,
So I know what to do
To make you happy.

I want to think exactly as you,
So I know exactly, your point of view,
I want to hurt the same time as you,
But somehow I feel, like I already do.
Just for a day, I wish I were you.

By: Janna Shaffer

rose
Member

since 2003-08-02

Posts 53

1 posted 2003-08-02 12:48 PM

this poem is beautiful in its simplicity.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-08-03 08:54 PM

ah yes, understanding the opposite sex...if it is indeed that. but if we understood then we wouldnt be so intrigued, which takes away all the love. we never truly understand, when we do, i believe the love will stop.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-08-04 02:28 AM

I've often wanted to be able to do that.
excellent poem, I really love it.
Another for my library.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2003-08-04 04:25 PM

This is good, simple. I liked it. I often wish I could do that.
~Lex

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