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Lindsay
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since 2003-03-26
Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2003-08-02 11:16 PM



I know I should have given you a chance before
I know now what I did was a mistake
And I greatly regret it

I’m just hoping for one more chance
Even though I don’t deserve it
I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me

Because I do believe we can make this work
I do believe we can be a couple once more
I do believe in us

© Copyright 2003 Lindsay Strube - All Rights Reserved
jaysh
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 133
IL, USA
1 posted 2003-08-03 12:22 PM


good write, I have spoken those words before, I know how ya feel! -janna
Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
2 posted 2003-08-03 01:47 AM


I’ve been there before, it hurts. hope you luck keep righting

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

3 posted 2003-08-03 09:19 PM


ahh yes, what is it that happened to the faith in our relationship?  *hatred realizes hes talking to himself and submits.*
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