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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
You knew we could never be, Still you teased me with false hopes. Tears returning my foolishness, Reminds me how I wasted my time. If time could only be so kind, I would still be living in our past. My love for you, Is irrelevant to what reality brought. Pouring out of my soul, Is regret from wanting to be with you. I cant sleep, Not without knowing you still care. Who was it whom you had loved once before, And where has she escaped to. You cant stand to hurt her, Although you did without another thought. My vision of what we could’ve been, Is so surreal. We could never continue, A lie which you had provoked. She’s taken you away with the scent of her perfume, but now all we have are memories. Regaining consciousness, I disregard whatever I felt. In my heart I wished you could love me, As much as I still love you. Im trapped, Inside my feelings for you. Why’d I let us go so far, When I knew we wouldn’t last. Why’d you have to go, And say you loved me. I cant stop thinking about you, And now I regret us. I want to remain friends although you may think otherwise. The thought still lingering on, That I’d still end up with you. You’re the object of my affection, Whom I've loved for so long, I have to let you go. * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * [This message has been edited by Pollita (08-02-2003 10:53 PM).] |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
loved it. Wow, that speaks right to my heart. " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
wow, i thought that was really good. maybe because it hits really close to what i'm going through right now. a little to far with a friend and all i get is betrayal. good job, keep it up. |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Thanks guys...It means alot to me...especially the first 2 verses.... and the guy its about...well..if he comes here, he'll know its bout him...stuff happened and now we're just friends...Although I still love him and he seems to still like me. "My immortal" by evanesence is how I would describe how I feel about him. Im glad you guys liked it, It means alot that im not alone in what im going thru, especially when mostly everyone turned their backs on me already. My e-mail is beach_bunny_cutie69@hotmail.com if you guys ever wanna talk. *smiles* * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hmmm... is everything okay hon?  |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
..Rhonda!!!! Nope, everything isnt okay.... Yesterday I spent a while thinking, bashing my head, and crying. But I had a dream last week and my and his convo was almost identical. So I expected it...And then...well...Im not sure what he's feeling. So Im really confused. Alot has been happening lately and I'll tell u bout it later on msn. * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
*hatred is with you and pissed off at himself* good write. |
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