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Dear Family
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Dear Family |
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AlostHeart Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 78Wisconsin, U.S. |
Dear Family, Mother, How do you want me to dress? Father, What do you want me to be? Brother, When do you want me to play? Grandma, what sport do you want me to be in? Grandpa, How smart do you want me to be? Oops. Too bad, I'm sorry. I am me, Nothing that you want me to be. Whoopsie... Be happy, and respectful, dont forget about those ones that will always love you no matter how much you screw up! |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
um..it was a good..straight forward don't tell me what to do type thing. But nothing stood out to me. It was ok. It could have been presented differently. Elaborate maybe. Just my truth. Others may see differently. Thanks for sharing. ~Lex..  |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
This personaly to me was a great write. i totaly understand you. Family's are very honest and some times expect to much form you(at lest in my experince). Thankx for your thoughts Tequilia |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
totally:-) * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
exactly how it is!!  |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
hey Tor I wish there was something I could do to help you, but when it comes to family theres really nothing I can do. Just remember that we love you, and I don't know when, but I promise you that someday things will be better. It won't be like this forever. lylas.  -Jen |
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