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Mournful Poet |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Darkness invades her privacy, When she sits down to write. The demons in the dark won’t let her be, Never a happy moment, never any light. All her wounds won’t seem to heal, The pain is even in her bones. She’s suffered so much, and it’s real, But no one believes her, ‘cuz she’s alone. An unexpected burst of treachery, Led her to where she is now. All she wants – is to be free – Of the torment she faces, but how? Clutching her notebook tight, She wants to walk away. Only she has nothing left to write, And nothing left to say... If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
I can really identify with this poem. You really captured the feeling well. |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
This was awesome, Staci! I especially liked the last two lines at the very end of the poem. Good job! ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow...  I too can relate all too well to this. I've actually tried to write on this subject before but it doesnt work out. You've done it so well and with such honest expression. This was wonderful. Going in my library. Kay Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
good onnnneeeeeeee. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
This was awesome! Great work! ~Jess  "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
Nice, I liked it and aswell could relate to the feelings. I wear my crown of thorns |
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Alnilam Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75 |
great job. its nice to see you writting and posting again. glad your writer's block ended. great post. ~*Alnilam*~ |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Nice work Spine Grinder, I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing this with us  Andy |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
"Only she has nothing left to write, And nothing left to say..." Stac! This one is great! I ESPECIALLY love those last 2 lines. Beautiful. God...you have such a way with words...not to get all sentimental...but you can definitely reach people. LoL. Ok...enough of that. Ha. Love's. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
I also really liked the last two lines of this one, nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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~*Tantalize*~ Junior Member
since 2003-07-29
Posts 26Sunny California (San Francisco Bay Area) |
She wants to walk away. Only she has nothing left to write, And nothing left to say... That was amazing, wonderful work. Thanks for sharing. Jen |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Thanks everyone! I'm glad you all liked this. "Is there anyone out there cause it's getting harder and harder to breathe"~Maroon 5~ |
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