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brezee
Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 140

0 posted 2003-07-29 12:10 PM

Everytime, trying to speak to you
My knees get so weak
Why do i even try
I don't think I'll ever speak

The real truth to you
And how you make me feel
Sometimes it seems so weird
Is it even real?

If you could only see
The pain I hide inside
I know that I can't have you
So why do I even try?

They say there's plenty
Of fish in the sea
Well I think you are
The only one for me.

Without you I'm nothing
And even when you're there
I wonder if you're listening
Or if you even care

I know you will always be
One of my best friends
But that's not how I want
This fairytale to end.

I don't know why it hurts
Maybe inside I'm jealous
But mostly inside I feel
Like I'm just plain helpless

Maybe someday my dream
Will come completely true
And everytime i hurt
I'm glad it's because of you.

I havent written in a while but i just got a major inspiration so i'll start again.

~*~*brezee*~*~

[This message has been edited by brezee (07-29-2003 03:30 PM).]

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

1 posted 2003-07-29 12:15 PM

yes Bre keep writing! god write, i really think so!

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

2 posted 2003-07-29 12:17 PM

good* too lol my bad

kj
Junior Member

since 2003-07-28

Posts 15
Australia

3 posted 2003-07-29 04:02 AM

this is awesome keep it up

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

4 posted 2003-07-29 12:40 PM

ha ha, reminds me of a friend ive got. you'll see this note...and you know what im talking about, haha...peace homie.

Song_for_Serenity
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

5 posted 2003-07-29 10:45 PM

Great poem! I really liked it. It kinda reminds me of a situation I once experienced. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Have a spiffy day!
Sealed with a

~Angela
"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..."

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

6 posted 2003-07-30 01:20 AM

This put words in my mouth! LOL. I'm not quite sure what to say other than...Great write! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

7 posted 2003-07-30 05:02 PM

That is a really good poem i really enjoyed it! Awsome job!

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